First Person (entry type): I stand and look uncertain. Where am I? What am I doing here? I seem to be missing somebody but I am unsure who. Why can't I move my body. I do not know what is going on. MOVE! HELLO! Riku? He's standing over me and he looks so sad. Riku! Riku! I can not speak. I can not move. All I can do is lay here. Thats right! I do not have a heart. My heart was stolen from me. How can this be and without my heart, I can not live. I'm feeling tired now...soo very tired. Oh well. Goodbye Sora....my love....my love? why ever did I think that......?...
Third Person: She stands at the beach and looks completely confused as she stares at the paper in the hand. Who was the strange boy... and what name did he say? Sora? What a strange name. She feels connected with his name for some reason and she feels as though she should know who he is. Sora...wait...soorrra. It rings no bell though she believes that it should. As she starts writing down his name on a piece of paper that she is going to send off to sea, it hits her like a bolt of lightening. SORA! The past year flashes by so quickly that Kairi actually has to sit down and puts her head between her knees. SORA!! How could she forget him? She finishes the note and puts it into a bottle and out to see. Find Sora so he knows that she is still thinking of him.
I'm sorry but this application has been rejected; I recommend replaying the game to gt a better grasp on her characterization as well as her manner of speaking.
It may also be beneficial for you to have someone proofread your applications before you send them in as the level of grammar and spelling errors made it sort of difficult to read and in some cases can detract from your characterization. Please feel free to reapply. ♥
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Kairi 2/2
I stand and look uncertain. Where am I? What am I doing here? I seem to be missing somebody but I am unsure who. Why can't I move my body. I do not know what is going on. MOVE! HELLO! Riku? He's standing over me and he looks so sad. Riku! Riku! I can not speak. I can not move. All I can do is lay here. Thats right! I do not have a heart. My heart was stolen from me. How can this be and without my heart, I can not live. I'm feeling tired now...soo very tired. Oh well. Goodbye Sora....my love....my love? why ever did I think that......?...
Third Person:
She stands at the beach and looks completely confused as she stares at the paper in the hand. Who was the strange boy... and what name did he say? Sora? What a strange name. She feels connected with his name for some reason and she feels as though she should know who he is. Sora...wait...soorrra. It rings no bell though she believes that it should. As she starts writing down his name on a piece of paper that she is going to send off to sea, it hits her like a bolt of lightening. SORA! The past year flashes by so quickly that Kairi actually has to sit down and puts her head between her knees. SORA!! How could she forget him? She finishes the note and puts it into a bottle and out to see. Find Sora so he knows that she is still thinking of him.
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It may also be beneficial for you to have someone proofread your applications before you send them in as the level of grammar and spelling errors made it sort of difficult to read and in some cases can detract from your characterization. Please feel free to reapply. ♥
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