I'm sorry but this application has been rejected. The samples do not show an adequate enough grasp of character, though the history and personality were nearly perfect. I thoroughly recommend hashing him out in a dressing room or a place like dear_mun, you've nearly got him, his voice just sounds off.
I think it's just the first person sounds almost too formal? It comes off more stiff than elegant, if that makes sense? But yes, almost there! Please feel free to apply again. ♥
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I think it's just the first person sounds almost too formal? It comes off more stiff than elegant, if that makes sense? But yes, almost there! Please feel free to apply again. ♥